I really liked this! I like how it seems to be too good to be true, and there are little hints that something is off, but it's still seems sweet and nice until Mal shows up. And then upon re-reading, you can see what's real and what isn't. Very well-done.
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Date: 2011-02-17 02:07 am (UTC)